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[Fan Fiction] The Fall

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NaChooChewKage

Junior Member

01-24-2015

Hi there!

I'm working on a Fan Fiction which I used to update every Tuesday, based on short chapters that tell a bit of some character's part of the story. Tons of work, exams and that kind of things have illuminated me and now I'm publishing every Saturday (starting today).

The plot is centered around Runeterra's death; the land, corrupted, is being killed by the will of men. Anger, revenge, fear and despair lead humanity to an endless battle against magic itself. Only a few will realize what is really happening, creating bonds between characters that would have been impossible otherwise.



These are the previous chapters:

Prologue: Dr. Veles Kozim's Daily Log (http://nachokage.blogspot.com.es/2014/12/the-fall-0.html) features Zilean and LeBlanc.

Chapter 1: And All Things Will End (http://nachokage.blogspot.com.es/2014/12/the-fall-1.html) features Jarvan IV, Garen, Darkwill and LeBlanc.

Chapter 2: Elvesham (http://nachokage.blogspot.com.es/2014/12/the-fall-2.html) features LeBlanc and Thresh.

Chapter 3: The Glorious Executioner (http://nachokage.blogspot.com.es/2014/12/the-fall-3.html) features Garen, Jarvan IV, Draven and Xin Zhao.

Chapter 4: Unchaining the warden (http://nachokage.blogspot.com.es/2014/12/the-fall-4.html) features LeBlanc, Thresh and Jayce.

Chapter 5: Ziraeth's Mistake (http://nachokage.blogspot.com.es/2014/12/the-fall-5.html) features LeBlanc, Thresh, Xin Zhao and my first original POV character in the story; Malcolm, a Noxian general overshadowed by Darius.

Chapter 6: The Glorious Execution (pt. 1) (http://nachokage.blogspot.com.es/2015/01/the-fall-6.html) and Chapter 6: The Glorious Execution (pt. 2) (http://nachokage.blogspot.com.es/2015/01/the-fall-710.html) are the two parts of the 6th chapters. This chapter as a whole is centered on the Noxian fall, and features Darius, Draven, Xin Zhao, Thresh and Malcolm (my first original character) as POV characters.


The last chapter I published is Chapter 7: Crows for the Dead (http://nachokage.blogspot.com.es/2015/01/the-fall-7.html) which shows the consequences of what happenned in Noxus.


The next chapters will bring us back to Demacia and Piltover to let us know what has been hapenning during this time at Noxus, shreding some light onto what is going on around there. Yasuo will also appear, being the one in charge of opening the Bilgewater storyline.

Feel free to give opinions and comment (here or in the blog). I love discussing about what I write (as it helps a lot to get better at it) and I'm open to criticism of any kind. Thanks for your time!


Edit: Chapter 8: The Cleanse Begins (http://nachokage.blogspot.com/2015/01/the-fall-830.html) and Chapter 9: The Prodigal Explorer (http://nachokage.blogspot.com/2015/01/the-fall-9.html) have been published. I'll be updating the main post for having all the links together in a single place.


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PlagueMortis

Member

01-25-2015

Dude I love it. And if you will allow me I would love to work on it with you. Some interesting things I have you might like with a character of my own, Kain. (basically Khorne who got fed up with warhammer and decided to rek Valoran) XD


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NaChooChewKage

Junior Member

01-25-2015

I wouldn't really be up to working onto the same thing with more people (I have already planned most of what's going to happen, I just need the time towrite it down and work on some details) but I would definitely be up to working on something new with someone. ┬┐Do you have any particular idea for it? There are a lot of champions I'd like to work with but I can't (the Freljord as a whole for example and most of Ionia is also left out of what I'm working at now).

And thanks for the comment!


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PlagueMortis

Member

01-26-2015

How about Lissandra for the Freljord? In any case I would like to colaborate with you on atleast something. And I look forward to reading your material. I'm also curious about this Malcolm fellow. When I saw "The Fall" I immediately thought of my own stuff and how it could possibly be linked together. In any case is it alright if I add you m8? Would love to trade ideas.


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NaChooChewKage

Junior Member

01-26-2015

Sure! I won't be online until tomorrow though, but add me and we can talk about it later on.

We could work onto what happenned before "The Fall", that way it wouldn't interfere with the story I already planned and all the characters/regions would be up to be taken into acount. I'll tell you something if I see you around.


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PlagueMortis

Member

01-27-2015

Will do man. I really look forward to this


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KnightPezz

Junior Member

01-28-2015

Hey, just wanted to say that this is a really good FanFic. It was quite enjoyable and I can see you spent some time researching. If you need any help with Editing I may be able to offer my services. Free of Charge.


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NaChooChewKage

Junior Member

01-29-2015

Thanks for the comment! Good to know you enjoy it.

I feel a bit foolish asking this but, what do you mean by "Editing"?

Thanks for your time, and remember that I'm open to any kind of criticism (via here, blog or adding me in-game and talking about it).


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NaChooChewKage

Junior Member

02-01-2015

Yesterday I published the 8th chapter (http://nachokage.blogspot.com/2015/01/the-fall-830.html) via Blog, but had no time to share it here. "The Cleanse Begins" features Yasuo and Quinn, giving us a start at the Bilgewater storyline while also deepening our knowledge concerning what happenned in Demacia after the Noxian events.


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NaChooChewKage

Junior Member

02-07-2015

As every saturday, here I deliver. The 9th chapter, "The Prodigal Explorer" (http://nachokage.blogspot.com/2015/02/the-fall-9.html), introduces Ezreal in the story and brings us back to Jayce. We also get some hints onto what LeBlanc is planning and some details concerning what hapenned to Lux.

Opinions, comments and criticism are always welcome!


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